Itni baar dil qatl -e- aam hua hai..
Dhadakta ab bhi hai, hairaan huun main..
Itni baar bikke hain gair ke haathon hum..
Keemat ab bhi hai, hairaan huun main..
Nabz utha ke dekho koi harkat nahi baaki..
Zindagi ab bhi hai, hairaan huun main..
Kasam -o- wafaa kab ke bichhad gaye par..
Rasm ab bhi hai, hairaan huun main..
Mukammal hue hain jazbaat ke samandar..
Kahaani ab bhi hai, hairaan huun main..
Yaaron mujhe le chalo ek naye jahaan mein..
Ye jahaan ab bhi hai, hairaan huun main..
1 comment:
Since i'm on a commenting spree here, so cover this one as well :)
Didn't like this one much.. looks like focus is on words, rather than thoughts.. Notice one thing, jab bhi focus thoughts par hoga, writing apne aap achchi nikal kar aayegi..
Nevertheless, zaruri nahin ki kisi ek ko achchha nahin laga to achchha nahin ho :)
Keep writing!
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